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"It's an interesting book reading it from different outcome from the original "
New Love
"This is a pretty hooking story, and it definitely has potential, although it has lots of grammar/spelling/punctuation mistakes. As well as the sentence "I sigh out of sadness" appears too often, so maybe you could cut that out and add other actions that show sadness. It's pretty hard to understand what's happening, so a more clearer storyline would make it great. But overall, I think that this is a good story, especially if you develop it more, because I really like the idea of a Dramione fanfiction."
