A lovely start

"Elisabeth something about this story hooked me, honestly. I would love to write another review when there are a few more chapters up, but for now I'll tell you what I can. I really like the way you write. Despite a few errors of vocabulary etcetera, (which everybody in the world makes) your style is a pleasure to read. The chapter is short and punchy and gives us a good idea of the world which you have created. I hope in the next one your main character can continue to grow :) Keep it up, never stop!"