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love

"wish there were more chapters now I'm entangled into mace side"

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another part

"another part of it should be written "

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A few areas I thought where words should have been but still a really great read!

"Really great read "

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Very very captivating novel please update I hope you're doing great

"Very very captivating novel please update ☺️ hi author I m big fan of your writing styles I hope you are doing great in life just hoping you will complete the story soon big hug to you all the best"

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Not a dream

"I loved how it just kept getting interesting and it drew me more and more into it and I just I love all of it other than I don't quite understand what she was felling in the beginning when Mase had her and she felt a bee like sting? But other than that I love it"

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Great Promise!

"Great way of writing. I definitely understand first person as this is fanfiction. But, I bet the author can get to third person. Anticipating tonread more."

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Vampires

"Liked the sudden twist in the story from a sweet farm trip to troubled scary events"

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Amazing

"It's amazing so far I love the love connection between them ❤ Loving mace and her ✨ Please update .. "

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Amazing

"To be honest this book is amazing the plot is good even in the beginning,middle,and end. And that’s coming from a person with adhd. Just read the book and I will see. "

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Not a dream

"I didn't like that the way the book ended so fast I would share this book with anyone And I forgot what the last question was "

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Not A Dream

"I really like the story but it's sad that it ends right in the middle and doesn't continue... that's kinda disappointing "

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I like reading love in fantasy

"I just like it . Still don't get what mace plan was?"

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Really good very interesting

"Really good"

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Overall a pleasing book

"A compelling and mind occupying book"

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It was very interesting

" I liked the whole story. I would recommend this my friends. It was a very interesting story."

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Idk

"It was very fun to read. I have no other comments "

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this book is so good!

"this book is very good!"

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Your book is amazing

"oh there is nothing to dislike in this book as far as I had read I would love to recommend this book to my friend who will be interested in vampires I choose to rate this book because I am reading it and you sure deserve a feedback ☺️"

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Not a dream

"Good story so far please continue i would like to see more of this story 🤗🤗🤗🤗keep up the good work "

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Not a dream

"This book is amazing. It has given me something to do other than sit around my house when i cant work ob my car. This is a whole new level of creepy and it is enchantingly good!💖"

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