What is your opinion?
Good Job😁
"I really liked the beginning but it was confusing a little but as a go on I get more and more of knowing what is happening but you did an amazing job at this book I can tell you worked hard. 😍👍🏾😁🤗🥳🤩🤣😇😆😁"
GREAT
"I honestly wasn't interested at first, at least not until i began the first chapter, which sucked me into a world full of magic immediately, everyone has personality s that are interesting and characteristics while are often used seem fresh in the story!!!I truly hope this becomes a big novel!!! I do think that the little girls personality is very vivid but seems overdone, I hope you can talk more about her bullying and how it affectes her."
Great story!
"I loved the story a lot! It's dark, and very morbid, and I like that you aren't afraid to write very grim scenes. Your protagonist's motivations feel real and convincing, so keep up the good work! Towards the end, it felt a bit like Bugs morals shifted too quickly, but if this is only a short story I can see how you might want to speed things up a bit. My tip would be to not be so on the nose about Bugs thoughts/feelings. Trust your reader to pick up on the tone of the scene and figure out what is going on between the likes themselves. I hope this is helpful! Love your work Quinn :) Keep doing what you're doing."
