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Awesome

"Good story"

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Hey Shivanig,

"I like this story And I am fan of MaNan and Arshi. There are so many stories left incomplete on India Forums, Wattpad and here also. Please don't leave this story incomplete. I am waiting."

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Awesome story

"Nice story"

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awesome

"pleae please please continue this story."

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Amazing

"Please............update"

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Secret daughter

"Gud one post soon"

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Manan

"Nyc story of manan "

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Veryy good

"It's quite emotional and thrilling but it is awesome"

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Anaya

"Different and interesting "

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fresh and new content

"mysterious yet amazing and capturing.."

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Manan ff secret daughter

"Beautiful update "

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Love

"Like the story very much "

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Nice work

"Nice work update soon "

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Good

"Best skill of writing "

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Marvelous

"Amazing read it one go."

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Awesome

"Awesome story"

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Great story ❤

"I like your story alot. Keep it up , good going. We are there for you to support.💪👍"

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Secret daughter

"Need to improve "

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Amazing Riya

"Amazing one jr"

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The baby flower

"The story plot is very different to other storys.l like the story"

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