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What is your opinion?
Mate (KTH)
"Ducking awesome (damn you autocorrect)"
Mate
"Loving the storyline I really hope you continue it it's very well written so far and seems to be very thought out "
Needs improvement
"I expected a lot from the book, but the first chapter itself was intensely disappointing. The grammar is terrible, and the book seems to be written by a twelve year old child. The second and third person switching is extremely inconsistent and the main character is inconsistent and seems to lack depth. This book has huge potential if re-written."
