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A dance with death

"I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book"

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Come back

"Love the read. Can't wait for the ending, "

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Awesome

"Love this book. Death and Lucifer surprised me with their compassion. Great love story. Can’t wait to see how it ends. Good job author!"

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Great book!

"I loved reading this book! "

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Dance with death

"Ok 1st I almost backed out of this but I dont know why it intrigued me so very well done and thank you, I definately enjoyed reading this story and what a different take on Death. And totally not an ending I was expecting with children. Ty for redoing those chapters at the end they helped. I also want to say how I appreciate that this story had nothing about sex in it for a welcomed change of pace. Hope to find more of your stories.πŸ™‚"

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A Dance With Death

"Great read"

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A dance with death

"Absolutely amazing book insanely intense completely loved it.πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–"

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I like t soo much i could read it the whole day

"I like the flow of the book and I would reccomwnd it for all my friends and family and I give it a 5star because its really nice I just love the story line ."

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Love it

"It's a great story and I love all the conflict that keeps it inter e sting. I'm really hoping they can end up being together and the stupid angel is killed. She's really starting to annoy me about not getting the hint. Love everything so far and can't wait to read how it will end. Happy I hope!"

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A dance with death

"Love love love πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–!!!!!!!!!"

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A Dance with Death

"This story started going in a direction that I wasn't expecting, but I'm not mad at all! It's progressed wonderfully and not too fast, which is also really nice. I like how you sprinkle in both Alex and Marylin's points of view so we know how both are feeling. Keep it up! I'm waiting for more! "

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Dance with death

"The grammar usage and writing are excellent for an unedited story. The storyline is good just a little juvenile for my taste. "

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