Great u need to finish it my shadow

"I was great so far from what I read. So finish it my shadow in order for us to critique the rest of your story. I especially love the way the author depicts the heroine. Nerdy who is jealous of her slutty friend and how he describes her Starbucks looking green apron. I mean down to the t. You would have though that the author sat down at Starbucks and literally watched a somewhat similar girl to get this kind of an idea and perhaps the author moderates himself after the mute gentleman that walks in. Not mute but maybe feels mute himself well done so far anxious to see where this goes. So excited I’m following back(my shadow)"