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Goooooooood

"Soooooooooooooooo Gooooooooooooooooodddd"

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Amazing

"Awesome story... Loved it...."

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Amazing

"Amazing superbbbbbbbbbbb ❤️❤️❤️ story "

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Awsm .... Pls update soon

"Manik love is so pure ....grt work dear ... "

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Breathtakingly awesome 😍😍

"I don't know how can u guys write so beautifully It's one of the bestt stories I've ever read❤❤❤"

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Different

""Ishq karna khata hai toh saza do mujhe"-this phrase suits the story. He is connected to her since when she was a zygote. Its really very very rare to see a lover nuturing his love playing role of her mother,father,sis,bro,bff and lover but it is called illict just because of age difference. In true love age doesn't matter but trust and togatherness matters💓."

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Crying

"😭😭😭😭😭😭 his mom has done it.😭😭😭😭 plz make him realize his jaan "

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Fabulous

"It's very intense and heart wrenching seeing Nandini fall apart really looking forward to next part "

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Loving it..

"I really like the concept...The emotions you have showed is so amazing...I really love the way you have showed their relationship... Beautifully written.."

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Excellent

"I loved the concept "

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Awesome

"Awesome Please update soon"

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