Revenge by Paaro at Inkitt
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Summary

When a girl takes revenge she forget love , kindness , mercy and this happen to Akira a small town girl . When a girl takes revenge she forget love , kindness , mercy and this happen to Akira a small town girl . Akira a gorgeous, sweet and simple 17 old year teenager .She was coming from a party with her parents and suddenly something happen that changed her whole life. This story is journey of Akira from being "ordinary to wildest evil queen".

Genre
Mystery/Other
Author
Paaro
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

6′o clock in the morning:

“Beep-beep!” (Alarm)

noo! I want to sleep for 5 minutes more I said

After some time -

Akira wake up its already 7 my mother told me.

what! 7 oh no

I jumps from the bed and goes straight to the bathroom.

At dining table-

Mrs Jonson - Akira come fast breakfast is ready .

Akira (in bathroom )- okay mom I’ll be there in 5 min.

Mrs Jonson - pfffff! Your 5 min.

At breakfast table :

Mr Jonson - I’m done . I want to tell you that today we will be going to Mr Williams house please be ready at 7 . (Mr Jonson - her dad)

Akira - I’m done and today I’ll come home as soon as possible.

Mrs Jonson - okay dear see you soon.


At 7 we head to Mr William’s house in car and the party goes well and as we were returning to home “DAD LOOKOUT!”.... “MOM DAD!”....

“NOO!”....


That was the last party I enjoyed with my family . Thats how my journey start from an ordinary girl to wildest evil queen.

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none of this makes any sense

6 years
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okay I don’t get this

5 years
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It isn't finished until it's over.. masterpiece of a work well written

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