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Hold On

"Great story. Grammar should have been reviewed or corrected. There are times characters were called the wrong name. "

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halo halo

"you have a very wonderful story here, I love your book, but your grammatical errors are quite much, maybe you can fix it, and use some apps for it, coz right now there are so many helpful tools for it, maybe because English is not your first language, sometimes it happens. Keep continuing author will wait for another book 🥰🥰"

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Good story

"The plot was really good, gets you really emotional at many places. Only if the grammar and spelling could be fixed then this story has the potential of being one of the best."

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A really really good story

"Ok, yes there are a lot of grammar mistakes. But trust me it’s worth reading. The beginning of the story captured my interest. A few chapters in the story was slowly progressing and there were a few chapters with a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes and I almost stopped reading the book. But part of me felt invested from chapter one and I kept reading. And I’m glad I did!!! The more I read the book the grammar and spelling mistakes because less...either that I was already used to it lol. Nevertheless, I ended up falling in love with the story. The plot of the story was fantastic and involved drama, suspense and a lot of other emotions including love, learning, patience, forgiveness, grief...and that’s only naming a few. I’m so glad I finished reading the story and definitely recommend the book to everyone! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️"

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Hold On

"This novel has an amazing storyline and beautiful set of characters. I enjoy the fluidity of the scenes. It needs some editing in terms of spelling and use of homophones. But still a very good story."

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Hold On

"Cried 4 times, is that too much? Can't blame me, loved it."

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Cool story!

"This was a good read! I genuinely loved the first chapter!"

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Hold on

"Awesome story. Enjoyed the storyline. "

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Really good

"Very exciting book "

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1234wac

"Excellent and exciting. As usual the men have very little faith in their women "

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Hold On

"This was a very good story 💕💕💗💗"

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Hold on

"Awesome read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Amazing Story

"After so many bad accident, the finally become in the end. I love the story. PS: Please make it better for the spelling-too much false words."

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Adorable

"It's really a adorable story i love it. I waited for the end to write down a review really amazing well done ...🖤🖤🖤"

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Beautiful

"Such a beautiful story, I loved every minute of it. "

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Ahhh

"Wow this emotional, I really enjoyed this story. I have chosen to write a review ignoring the fact that their were many many spelling errors because I loved loved the story its self. It kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time and untimely there were so many thing that I did not see coming, I loved it so much thank you author for writing this story and sharing is with us the readers."

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Okay

" love the story and made me cry I was happy beautiful The Only thing is that there were a lot of grammatical errors had to reread various times to understand but overall great job"

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I like it!!

"This is was good story overall. I agree with most of the reviews here. If the author go back and fixes the writting errors in the book I'm sure that it would be a bigger success. I love the storyline how every chapter has a purpose and it's always seem to be resolved or it has a way of figured itself out. It's like other books where she they will keep you wondering with unsolved story lines. "

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❤💙💜🖤💚💛🧡💛🖤💜💙

"❤🧡💛💚💙💜🖤💜💙💚💛🧡❤🧡💛💚💙💜🖤💜"

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Hold on

"I never saw that coming please tell me that the other chapters are coming soon. I cant wait to read the rest of it. So good and the plots in the story are very well placed...💗💗💗🌺🌺🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼💯💯💯💯"

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