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MANAN; MY BABY GIRL

Summary

hi guys ...im a new writer her on inkitt i really need you support .. this story is all about friendship and love on our fav characters of kyy (kasi yeh yariyan ) a boy manik malhotra who will try his best to save his babygirl love of his life from bad eyes .. lets see there journey.. this story will be in 2 languages English and hindi(urdu) in English hope you will love it ...

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
4.8 (8 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

PROLOGE

HI

guys im here with my first story

do tel me what do you think should i start this story or not ..

and it will be a short story may be almost 10 chapters or lees then 10 ..

Ma: harshad just stay away from her..

Ha: kiu bahen lagti ha kya...

Na: dii yeh kya ho raha ha mujhay to kuch samajh nai aa raha..

Nav: nandini tumhara janna zarori nai ha just nadini go tu your mani.. ..

Na : okkk..

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Harshad: to a girl: aww baby kitni innocent ha..and you are pretending as if you dont know what i mean...

Girl: mujhay sach ma samajh nai aa raha..

Har: i want you on my bed .. he said with a smirk..

person : harshad be in your limits ..

ha: oh so hero aaa gaya apni heroin ko lanay ...

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person :i want her on me bed by hook or crock ..utha lo osko ..

men: but sir onkay sath to hamesha koi nakoi hota ha and bohot safty hoti ha guards ki line lagi hoti ha if she comes alone ..

2 men : yes sir its very difficult..

per: its difficult not impossible do any thing ..

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so guys what do you think should i start this story or not pleazzz do tell me your comments matters a lot

And ya share it with your friends alsoo.

..even tell me of you dont want me to start

till then ..

love ..

As0oma.....

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author

prologue was really amazing ❤

8 years
author

nice

8 years
author

so amazing

8 years

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