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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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Applause

"What a poetic ending. Everything was just perfect. A big sigh of satistaction here. Thanks for this story."

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A Measure of Time

"So lovely to revisit this story after such a long time. It carried me along and swept me away just as it did the first time I read it. I'm glad to see it do so well in this contest. Congrats, bb. And MOO!"

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A great story.

"I really enjoyed this story... Very well written with very believable dialogue while still being true to the storyline and characters. I've found in many stories I've read that in certain situations, I'd be thinking about how "no-one would actually say that" or "I'd say this"... things along those lines, but never in this story. I think this was a great story. Thanks for taking the time to put this together, I can't wait to read more of your work. Sandy"

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Surprised...

"Your plot completely took me by surprise. I don't think anyone has written a New Moon AU as good as this one, If you would even put it into that category. There were a few words missing here and there, and I sometimes found your sentences to be repeating themselves (but I'm pretty sure that just because you were emulating a court like setting). I loved this story overall."

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