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Fort Liard

"As a beta, I found this story outstanding!! Plot, grammar, phraseology, etc Rachel gives us it all. She takes the story into the future from where due South ends. She is an exacting and thoughtful author."

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Fort Liard

"I loved this story!!! It was interesting and it explained a lot of what was going on between the characters at the end. Well done!!! I read it all at once and really enjoyed it. P.S. Chapter 11 has a mistake on one of the words."

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