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Madly In

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Summary

This poem is a description of a cute moment. A 19 - year old girl, who is "Madly In" Love with his all time crush waits for him all day long. Finally,he comes after a long wait.... His presence makes her upside down. She keeps on staring at him irrespective of the world around her. All the beats she listened till now, started playing in a loop. This is not the very first time they met. She wants to know how he feels. But still... something's making her set aback. Suddenly, there came a smile from the opposite side,which confirmed what she thought. She couldn't believe what just happened. He came closer and looked at her, lightening her eyes. She finally met with the moment she waited for and they moved together for a long walk....

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Hey Love!

I searched everywhere to find you now...

Since I was trying to get , your true- love...

My heart skipped a beat,when I saw you...Wow!

I’ve been staring all day long...

Without being concerned that I’d be wrong...

I was hit by a lyric of a melodious song...

That says you’re the one to whom I belong.

I smiled at you and I know you knew it...

But you acted as an innocent,with a lot of grit...

All this looks like a dramatic skit...

And I think it’s time to make a quit.

In the course of time, I saw a smile...

On your brighter face,but you changed meanwhile...

I can see your eyes lightened,even from a mile...

That’s what my heart is haunting for a while.

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