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Wow

"Im on the edge of my seat!!!"

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Good read

"Good book. Draws you in fast. Characters are thought out and interesting. Plot is really good. With some good twists."

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Amazing so far!

"Absolutely love this book so far! Wonderfully written! Please tell me this isnt complete?! I look forward to reading more! Please continue and keep up your amazing work! "

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Effective writing

"Lena is a strong and well written character and the reader is easily carried away. If you are looking for an easy read this text is not for you! To the more intrepid of you, welcome to a universe both black and fantastic!"

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Read this.

"Amazing book. I find the writing style both intriguing and beautiful and somehow the story in parts feels like a reflection of my own life - even though it has supers in it. Impressive."

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Awesomely good!

"I feel bad for her. No woman like her should be treated like that. She is strong but there is limitations. I hope she gets a happy ending. 😍😍❤"

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Interesting

"The story has definitely been interesting so far. I’m looking forward to seeing where it goes. I like that Lena is a bad ass but I hope she doesn’t go too soft."

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Amazing

"Amazingly deep story with a great plot!"

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Very good

"This is a very good story thus far. It has an intriguing plot and riveting story line. The characters are believable and well created. It's a very highly recommended must read fantasy novel "

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Cast In Iron

"The plot of this story and the chain of events is so enticing. Couldn't put my phone down - I love Alec and Lena! Alec sounds like a tall glass of water 😂"

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Cast in iron

"Absolutely Amazing "

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