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*Muffled Sobbing*

"You made me cry. Over a fanfic. I hate crying because everyone overcompensates and that makes me feel worse (thank goodness I was alone while reading this). Plus, it seems like I have to be the strongest in my family, so crying is showing weakness. That being said, if you can get me to cry at a story (and a fanfic nonetheless), you are truly an amazing author. This was a good story and I do understand wanting to write "the darker side". This was really good. Keep on writing."

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