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Thought Provoking, Quick Read

"I saw a link on my Goodreads feed this morning, and having read Peter's work before, I wanted to see what e came up with this time. I was done reading in 15 minutes - it was that quick. It left me wanting more... Phil should understand, as a scientist, that things take time to mature and settle. A baby dalmatian doesn't really have all of its spots as a puppy - they develop over time. Kyla's skin tone may not be immediately what he and and his wife selected on the order form. Rather than think for twenty seconds, he wants to send it back. How does he know what happens to the discards? - It could be, since they are made so quickly, that they are recycled and created into a new baby for another family. Who is to say the babies are allowed to mature and become the working class?"

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