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Loved it ..... Awesome story

"Story plot was neat and clear and the final twist was also super"

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Hey Arshichamkilig,

"I completed ur one more story. Story is really amazing, Keep writing and thank you for completing ur story"

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Awesome

"Like the story plot and the way the author carries the story forward."

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Thrilling

"Noice !! Gripping !!"

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plot was mind blowing

"i just loved how u weaved this story this is the first arshi story i read on Inkitt fully please write a FF with Anji as villian who will not be revealed till end if possible add a strong paayl i loved this payal and NK .the way they took was wrong but sometimes system is such that people stray"

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The plot is amazing

"The plot is nice and short and the characters are also realistic"

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Nice one

"Really nice one as murder mystery.. Though i missed romance and bubbly moments between Arnav & Khushi... Still i love the plot... Keep posting new update... eagerly waiting for new chapter 👍👌"

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Awesome story

"Awesome story "

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Good

"It's an unusual plot.. The author has done justice to it.. N didn't drag it too long."

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Ek Hasina Thi

"Awesome update Loving your story "

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Ek Hasina thi

"Nice story"

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Vinny

"Next chapter soon please..."

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It's awesome dear...! Please continue....😀

"It's awesome dear...! Please continue....😀 No corrections required...!!!"

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Amazing update

"Why I am feeling like Khushi killed Akash's friends? Maybe she came to know about her sister's death's truth somehow and killed them. I think she is going to kill the other person too before Arnav solves the real mystery."

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Ek hasina thi

"Loved the plot and especially the way NK questioned arnav "

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Love this story

"I love the plot of the story. It is amazing and continues to surprise me every chapter. Cant wait to read the next update. "

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loved it

"eagerly waiting for the update"

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Awesome

"Awesome just loved it so much suspense and in end the soul of Lavanya OMG that was a big surprise I am going to miss this story thank you"

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Hena

"Pls update soon"

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Ek hassina thi

"This story is awesome and very heart touching"

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