1 chapters read
Loved it ..... Awesome story
"Story plot was neat and clear and the final twist was also super"
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26 chapters read
Hey Arshichamkilig,
"I completed ur one more story. Story is really amazing, Keep writing and thank you for completing ur story"
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27 chapters read
Awesome
"Like the story plot and the way the author carries the story forward."
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27 chapters read
Thrilling
"Noice !! Gripping !!"
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26 chapters read
plot was mind blowing
"i just loved how u weaved this story this is the first arshi story i read on Inkitt fully please write a FF with Anji as villian who will not be revealed till end if possible add a strong paayl i loved this payal and NK .the way they took was wrong but sometimes system is such that people stray"
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27 chapters read
The plot is amazing
"The plot is nice and short and the characters are also realistic"
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27 chapters read
Nice one
"Really nice one as murder mystery.. Though i missed romance and bubbly moments between Arnav & Khushi... Still i love the plot... Keep posting new update... eagerly waiting for new chapter 👍👌"
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27 chapters read
Awesome story
"Awesome story "
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5 chapters read
Good
"It's an unusual plot.. The author has done justice to it.. N didn't drag it too long."
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9 chapters read
Ek Hasina Thi
"Awesome update Loving your story "
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24 chapters read
Ek Hasina thi
"Nice story"
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27 chapters read
Vinny
"Next chapter soon please..."
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17 chapters read
It's awesome dear...! Please continue....😀
"It's awesome dear...! Please continue....😀 No corrections required...!!!"
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17 chapters read
Amazing update
"Why I am feeling like Khushi killed Akash's friends? Maybe she came to know about her sister's death's truth somehow and killed them. I think she is going to kill the other person too before Arnav solves the real mystery."
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24 chapters read
Ek hasina thi
"Loved the plot and especially the way NK questioned arnav "
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5 chapters read
Love this story
"I love the plot of the story. It is amazing and continues to surprise me every chapter. Cant wait to read the next update. "
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27 chapters read
loved it
"eagerly waiting for the update"
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26 chapters read
Awesome
"Awesome just loved it so much suspense and in end the soul of Lavanya OMG that was a big surprise I am going to miss this story thank you"
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25 chapters read
Hena
"Pls update soon"
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10 chapters read
Ek hassina thi
"This story is awesome and very heart touching"
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