What is your opinion?
Heart wrenching
"This story is a very emotional chain of events that I wouldn't wish on the devil himself. For a human being to go through that their entire life is the worst kind of hell.. unfortunately the truth of it all is the fact that, that situation does exist and people really can be that cruel.."
I loved it
"There's nothing I disliked it and I gave it 5 stars because it's good and I don't have anyone I would recommend this to "
Slowly saying goodbye
"Such an amazing story..... I'm not a huge book fan but every character gave me the urge to keep reading!! Cant wait for the writer to finish if they do!!!"
Good
"Really well written on from a hard perspective. I am really hoping for the best for her even I'd I know she doesn't make it "
Slowly saying goodbye
"Good storyline so far. I like how thrilling it is. Easy to follow and draws you into the storyline."
I loved it!
"The plot was overall good and the writing was mediocre, which is rather good as many authors have complicated words which one might not understand. The good thing is it felt very realistic, it doesn't have many details, it's based emotionally, so the reader can connect to the story. I love this story and thank you for making this :) Best of luck!"
Great read
"Keep going! "
Really Great
"I really enjoyed what you have so far. It sounds really good. The early chapters need work, but other than that it is fantastic."
Improvement Necessary
"This is a good novel with a good plot. Based on your writing technique, I can tell you are rather young, however, your technique will improve over time. I noticed that in the first two or three chapters you would use pronouns to start your sentences quiet a bit, my suggestion is to not do that and use different words, possibly adjectives, though, in the fourth chapter I did notice a difference. There you sounded much older and experienced. The character development could use some work as well. One thing I like about you novel is that you transition from telling Lillian's story to her telling us what is like being dead and why she did certain things. I think that is a great concept and should be used throughout your novel. I love the plot, too. Anyways, I love your novel and I love you for writing it! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3"
