What is your opinion?
Wild Call
"I’ve been absolutely captivated by this book from the first sentence! I love the author’s use of imagery and simply how descriptive they are. Wonderful all around! 💛"
So good
"Very captivating. From the first chapter to the last. Always keeps you guessing!"
Hooked so far
"So obviously at this stage your story is only just starting and I haven't read the whole book. However, I can say I am at this point, hooked. You've done a good job at gathering my interest and I'm keen to read on. It's an intriguing concept so far. I'm enjoying reading and will keep your story on my reading list, so I can read the forthcoming chapters. The main weakness I see with the writing so far is the style. Generally, there are some very positive signs with it and I can see in places how amazing a writer you are, but in places it just feels like it needs a bit of honing. This isn't anything major but a few more edits would bring out the full potential in what looks set to be a fantastic read. Otherwise, the pacing and structure feels perfect for the target market and I look forward to reading the next chapters as I am really enjoying this story."
Loving it so Far
"I am writing this review based off of the first seven chapters. Simply put, I am extremely interested to see where this story goes. The MC is a character easily liked by the reader and her past warrants appropriate sympathies. She has great power and an admirable amount of stubbornness which is entertaining to see reveal itself in her personal belligerence against her mother. At this point in the story, it feels as if everyone is being set up still and the reader is still in the stage of understanding where we are starting in the story and who everyone is in relation to everyone else. Pieces of the plot are leaking through steadily and hints of information are given in well timed areas to keep the reader on the edge of their seat wanting to know more. There are areas in need of some clean up and a few more pieces of depth to be added, emotions, detailed imagery etc..., but all in all it is a great start to a novel that will surely be fantastic once it is completed. Excited to see where the book goes and what lies in store for our MC and supporting characters. ;)"
Nice start
"The plot is really interesting. I liked the way this chapter creates suspense while also providing hints of answer. The grammar and writing style is also good. "
