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Pretty girls

"I dont like it. I LOVE IT"

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Ooo God i love this story a lot 😍

"Thanks author for giving the best story 😊 i love it and like our hero a lot"

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Pretty Girls

"I liked everything about this book and would recommend to everyone. It was very well written and I absolutely loved it."

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Pretty Girls

"This is currently my favorite book right now. I love EVERYTHING about it! I hope it doesn't only get published into a hard cover but also made into a movie. The author just earned a huge fan🤗🤗🤗"

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Pretty girls

"Loved this book from beginning to end "

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Love it

"Apollo and Odessa are an awesome couple only I think Apollo is in love with Odessa. This is an awesome story and a must read. To the author: you should have this published. Loving this story!!!!!"

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Masterpiece 👌🏾

"This story is just too wonderful. Amazing author "

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Pretty girls

"This is a very sweetly written story I have read so far. The author's way of describing minor details of the surroundings , the emotions all are wonderfully dealt with."

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I love it

"You way of words author are so good to be true.. 😁 I love the flow of the story and Hoping foe more... "

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Love it

"Just the story I was looking out for. Simple beautiful and lovely. Emotions and no exaggerations. I had an amazing time reading this "

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love it

"the book is so good"

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BEST STORY ♥️😭Perioddd!!!!

"I could really feel or should I say lived in all the raw emotions and feelings of The main characters Apollo really makes u fall hard for him and his little caring attitude without him and others knowing what he’s doing for them people like Him or should I say Friends like him are Blessing that one u find should cherish♥️Beautiful story without any mature content or stuff it still captivated me and this book has my heart 😭💖🤧"

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Pretty Girls

"Not normally what I would read, but after a few chapters I couldn’t put it down. I was a little disturbed by Apollo not getting proper medical attention for Dessa after her accident (however the action does play in with his selfish nature). The book drug a little when Apollo seemed to get so hung up on Dessa forgetting “the kiss” in New York! She was drunk! And he knew that - clear the air… Still a great read! Keep it up Aurora!"

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Pretty girls

"This is such an interesting book. Why do you not have a published book yet?!?!? This should be an award winning book! Thank you so much for this story 😭 I feel like I’m in it at times."

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Pretty girls

"Very nice book"

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Amazingggggg

"This book was so amazing I was so freaking pissed of at the ending at dessa but then I literally cried when she started apologizing at the airport omgggg I loved it "

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Mrs

"Oh thank you Mistress of words and weaver of change. I'm very much enjoying this tale of opposites, both who have beautiful hearts, one who uses anger & rebellion to retaliate, the other a cloak of invisibility and rejection to compensate for their loneliness and disallusionment. You have created a gravitational pull they can't resist, two planets circling each other, an ever faster collision course of their hearts. I'm just waiting for the inevitable force field to spin them wildly away from each other, perhaps by parental direction or personal rejection because of misunderstood intentions and fear of caring too much. I already hurt for them even as the beauty of their friendship and understanding offers a shared maturity only soul mates can experience and can't wait for the eventual gravitational pull to once again bring them close, this time for good. "

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I want more!!!

"I wish for more of their happy together but so glad it worked out. There were some sentence structure and flow issues in a few places but otherwise so good."

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Appolo

"What a story !!!!!? Loved it"

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Pretty Girls

"I definitely recommend this book , It was amazing. It was really well written. The connection between the characters was so beautiful and unique. Don't miss the opportunity of reading such a fantastic book.😉☺🤗😇😍❤❤🌹💕💞"

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