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A short story in which a girl loves her ex-boyfriend, from afar as he now loves another. The twisted truth, a lie, tore them apart. But the question is... Does it actually hurt less? or is that just another lie too?
Every day
you wait for him.
Yet everyday
he goes with her.
And you wish
that you never lost his love.
The love that he now
gives to her.
Thank you so much for reading, I hope you enjoy this short story!!
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Heartwarming
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Great Character
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Strong Dialog
Linda: Plot is good but a little repetitive. Recommend for readers who like an easy ready, simple storyline.
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BlueMountain: I just absolutely love this story! The characters are great and the plot amazing, but what I fell for the most is the writing style. It's fantastic! I just love the easy-going roll of words and actions. And Yoda... His constant presence in this story is surprisingly perfect, and funny. The image of ...
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dilosch: Heartwarming story !!! A strong, independent, clever woman!!! And the male characters always respected woman(Not so much smut/spice - not that detailed)Nice plotNice writing style Nice character development
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NN: It got me from chapter 1. I’m sad it ended, but I loved the whole story. It was very emotional to read parts of it, and the dynamics, characters, and plot twists were amazing. I’d like to have an epilogue... 10years from now. What happened to Dewey? Even Jordan hahahaha
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Ankica: I like everything, recommend to my friends, plot is interesting, main female character is great
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user-tS2KGSfVD3: Beautifully written. Excellent character development and a setting in Ireland, with all it's beauty, never hurts. With spice for those who like it.
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Angela Mullen-Akporiaye: I like the banter between Aldrich and Lucy. She’s sassy and kind. He’s vulnerable and strong. There’s a verisimilitude in the way that they relate. And when he came looking for her, she didn’t shrink. Bravo!
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Jazzy Sideris: Had me in tears at times ,but a really good read . Good work
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