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writting skills

"I absolutely loved this story and enjoyed it so much Where did the idea for this come from and are you working on anything new I'd love to read more of your work "

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One of my favourites

"I had read this some time ago on another site. I am still floored by how real the author makes the boys and their father and Bobby. Its kind of like watching a really involved episode. A lot of authors go for the easy option of writing John as a one dimentional bastard. Heres he's nuanced and sympathetic in spite of his sizeable flaws."

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Good so far

"I like the plot so far, there different perspectives of the whole ordeal and how they are all dealing with this trauma."

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