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Amazing

"Author's way of telling is so good, I suggest you join NovelStar's writing competition on April."

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I love this!!

"I absolutely love this!!! Please do continue I can’t wait to read more"

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I'm hooked.Totally hooked. No way back from here. Give me more

"I'm so hooked. I don't even want to exist in this world anymore after reading this.😩😍 Can you update soon Please. I'm dying here"

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Glossary

"I absolutely live this story I just feel like there are too many names it needs a glossary at the start to help understand what’s going and a little background knowledge of the kingdoms and who is related to who because it can get slightly confusing."

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Brilliant plot line....absolutley gorgeous.

"Grammar and punctuation can done better, but other than that; this sublime. Kept me captivated, read it in a day. I cant wait gor more."

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Interesting

"The book is so freaking mysterious, each chapter brings more questions and so far very few answers. I literally can't wait to finally find out who and what the hell Keiza is! Love it."

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Fiza

"At times I'm confused to whom the writer was referring to. Bit overall the story is interesting. I could not stop reading. I love kezia ,& Adrian character. Keep on writing. I would suggest this book to my friends & family. "

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Blaze

"This is, seriously, one of the best plot lines I have ever read! How do you even come up with these ideas? It is such a captivating story that I literally only slept at 4 am last night. The only thing I would change is that in many places there are sooo many negatives (not, neither, etc.) that the meaning of the sentence gets a bit jumbled but it's tolerable. And a few typos and minor grammar errors but you don't need to be a genius to figure out what you're trying to say. So glad that I gave this book a chance despite it only having 3 reviews at the moment but I saw how successful 'Aries' is and decided I'd to try this out (I think the only reason 'Aries' is more successful is because it's a werewolf book and the PLOT). In my opinion, this is much better.:)"

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Blaze

"Seriously one of my favorite books I always get excited when you post new chapters and I can’t wait for the next "

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Blaza

"I loved reading It, the story is amazing "

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Love this story

"Love reading your books."

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Pls continue this book.

"Hi your writing style is realy unique i have read you aries book and it is the finest book i hve read so far. Pls continue this book too. "

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Nice

"Loved the book . Initially hard to keep up with the names"

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