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"I love the story line. I think that this is going to be a great story to read. That being said, their are formatting and grammer errors that make the story a little hard to follow along with. The chapters also feel a little rushed since its so cramped. I think this story could go a long way, but needs some fixing up. Keep up the great work!"
