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' You cried, you weeped. You felt so cheap ' "Rejection doesn't mean you aren't good enough;It means the other person failed to notice what's in front of them..." ᴮᵒᵒᵏ ⒈
one word
two letters
that moment
when nothing else matters
"yes" you thought
But "no" it was
You cried,You weeped
You felt so cheap
They didn't worry
They didn't care
It was a No there
You thought:
"There had to be a yes somewhere"
But you stopped
you recited "Beware"
New feelings came
You pushed them away
thinking "No"
"I'll just have to let go"
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Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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Caspian Gray: Hello everyone!I'm Caspian Gray, a writer who focuses on deep, character-driven emotional dramas. I'm currently looking for trial readers for my new short drama, "Love of the Introvert."It's a story of...
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Shriya: It's a beautiful story with strong characters and a great story line. It's emotionally very engaging from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this.
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lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!
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barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama
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I love it. Its kinda reminded me of one of my poem collections
it's good, I like the flow
I love it! It has a point and it's easy to read and understand. Good job,!