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LOVED IT!

"Honestly obsessed when sydney showing up drenched on Peter’s doorstep and he’s all grumpy but still lets her in was peak soft villain energy."

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The Last of Us

"Phenomenally the most outstanding story journey that one could venture through! Sydney and Peter were undeniably a couple to know, as well as the other characters! Thank You "

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In love

"Any Peter Hale stand should read"

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Loved it

"I loved this book. I like that it still followed the actual seasons but gave a completely different view of both the side lines you don’t see and the main fights that you do. Brilliantly written. I hope you do more fanfic because you’re amazing at it. I will definitely read this again. I loved every single page. "

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Absolutely fantastic!

"I started reading this fanfic when it was on another site and was instantly pulled in by how well the author manages to keep characters, in character. I never thought I'd find a Peter/OC story that didn't make me gag but Sydney has won me over. She's spunky, badass, and not at all delusional about who she's chosen to be with."

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