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manan: mistake or sin ?

Summary

story on manan ..to see more peep in .. its my sisters storyy which is going to get published on my acc hey guys . (its my sisters story written by her so dont mind the name on the cover ) im writing story first time on my fav couple manan. its a dark story so the story is about misunderstanding. mistakes or sin? u can decide but for that u have to wait. it will be reaveled after some chapters . if there is any grammatical mistake so please sorry. please comment and vote. support me guys.

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 (3 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

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In a dark room in corner one girl is crying hugging her knees.

And just then a guy came in a girl in shivering because she is scared of the guy the guy came near her grabbed her hair and pull her up . Girl is only crying and saying

Girl: please choro mujha its hurting

Guy:(sugary voice)ohh dard ho raha ha nandu baby ko tch tch tch(angry) adat dal lo is dard ki ab isi tarah rehna ha tumha pori zindagi. Because u are my wife nandini murty oh sorry nandini malhotra.

Yes the girl is nandini.

Nandini:( crying ) please leave me. Kon ho tum. Kiu laya ho mujha yaha. Ma to tumha janti bhi nahi.( lil angry+loud) Or i don’t believe in this marriage. Zabardasti ki ha tum na yeh shaddi.

Guy become angry and make his hold tighter on her hair. Making her screem in pain.

Guy: habardar agar unchi awaz ma baat ki mujh sa. Tum jo bhi samjo shaddi to hamari hui ha. Or mana tum sa shaddi is lia ki ha only to make ur life hell . Samjhi us sa bhi batar.

Guy pushed her on floor and started to go but stopped in middle and

Said:(sugary ) ma to bhol hi gaya tumha to mara nam bhi ni pata . So let me tell u. My name is manik . Manik malhotra. Ur husband.

And left. Nandu is still crying and praying her ayiapa to save her from this devil.

So what will happen.

How he will make her life hell.

And why.

By by.

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hey update

8 years
author

hey please update na it's amazing story

7 years

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