Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

The story is amazing

"The story is amazing"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Reunited

" Choose ratings because the content is suitable for adult audience. I would recommend to my friends and colleagues. I dislike Christian lack of trust in Ana."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Very good

"It has been a wonderful story with a wonderful plot"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
It was good but I wish it was a littlebit longer

"I wish it was a little bit longer than it was l love it I can't wait to see if there any more books like this I really enjoyed this book "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Till now it's pretty cool, I really love it

"So far great "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Fifty shades

"Great Story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Review of fanfiction

"I feel the writing is from someone who either doesn't speak English or it is not their native language. This makes it very difficult to read. The story plot is ok. I like the relationship between Christian, Elliott, and Mia. Ana's relationship with Luke and Gideon is a little confusing to me. But the biggest problem is writing. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Loved Phoebe's character the most

"It is a great story with few thing that doesn't go down my head like ana being called christians submassive and many more such things but i loved Phoebe's character would like to read more chapters revealing about Ethan's secret and Phoebe's birthday celebrations and about ana and christian's love story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Grey of hope

"I like the whole idea of the plot twist. But some of the grammar was terrible. I still love what I have read so far and I have recommended my friends to read it"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Fifty shades of hope

"Please edit. Hard to make sense of the story in some areas."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Where is the rest?

"The heck where is the rest of the book? "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation