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Naive

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Summary

Valentina a beautiful girl finds a jobs so that she can fend for her life with her little sister while trying to avoid love Nothing's as cruel as being naive that should have been my name I was naive since birth I thought the teacher invited me to meet his daughter so i could make some friends but really he wanted to touch my body I told the principal and she had him fired and me expelled in middle school I thought the popular boy liked me but he liked my best friend and would bully me for looking at him In highschool I became popular or so I thought everyone wanted to make me feel good about myself until the big plan unfolded on prom when my boyfriend had a chocolate pudding tank dumped over my head and walked over to my rival and kissed all over her and in college I studied business eventually hating the world until my baby sister macy was born and when I met the guy that could make jesus wanna cry with lust Sin Stone

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

My name is Valentina Mary Smith and because of my naive brain I was tricked by my evil mother and wicked sister into raising a baby that's not even mine. 6 years ago my little sister Macy Smith was born into this world my sister said that she was a disgrace to the family for bringing a child into the world without proper relationships meaning she was clueless as to who the father of Macy was she left Macy in the hospital nursery hungry and alone.

My mother raised Macy for 3 weeks and convinced me that I was better qualified to raise Macy but how could I when I was only 17 at the time but I didn't care about that I cared that a little girl was going to be mother-less if I didn't help her so I did but my mother told my father that I was the one sleeping around and that I conceived Macy just so happens that My sister was plotting with my mother they ended up kicking me and Macy out in the blizzard we were all each other had and when I turned 18 I knew that life was cruel.

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