The Next Dimension : The Arrival
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The Next Dimension : The Arrival

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Summary

Rilemann; the smartest person of the Universe had to go take a rare element in space called the Finalium for the Presidents of the USA. This mission was secret and only the CIA Executives knew about it and they plannified the takeoff of the rocket in Area 51. So Rilemann and his A.I Robot called Intx were going on an adventure to space but will they comeback...

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

It's 2am, Rilemann had just came back from the long journey from a Gillians planet called Gilla. It was a gift I had to send to planet Gilla, which was from earth. It was an amazing one. The Gillians were so friendly and nice. but it was so hot like, 63 degrees Celsius on planet Gilla. worst of all, in planet Gilla, time moves so fast so I need to stop by at OPlanet store Which is far from planet Gilla. it would have took me 6 months to reach. But, thanks to my new technology, it takes me only 6 hours to reach. I had to use a little bit of the gift given from the Gillians, which is an ore only found from planet Gilla to make the rocket. I call it, the rocket5000. Mind Blowing right? I know am so cool. Am on my way OPlanet store. Oh and i almost forgot, i stole a bunch of Gillians from Gilla, so am being chased by army they should be trying to break through my force field.

'HEY GIVE OUR GILLIANS BACK OR YOU'LL PAY FOR IT!!' Said the Gillians

'pay for it hnh? Well I have got a ton of money. even after death, i will never give or lend you some money not even a single penny. And one more thing, i didn't wanna say this(I actually do) but your disgusting, smelly, ugly and WHAT THE HELL DO YOU EAT! its so, so... dumb! Am sorry ok but you have to change a little(Not that I care)so, bye byeee!' said Rilemann with a loud and inspirational voice.

Rilemann and his robot Intx, to off to Oplanet store!

'BLAH! Arg! THAT WAS DISGUSTING! RIGHT INTX?' Shouted Rilemann as he Barfed.

'I-I think it was beau-uuu-utiful' Said Intx with a worm voice.

Rilemann wipe his mouth and turned to Intx and said

'A,a... Are you... Is something wrong with you?' And as he moved closer to Intx, he said

'What do you need, did you eat too much human food?I can fix you, come, oh wait, Check for any errors in your hardware'

Intx just froze looking forward and said

'CHECKING...CHECKING...CHECKING... ERROR FOUND! ERROR CODE 15 [ERROR_INVALID_DRIVE (0xF)]. BEEEB EEEB BEEE-EEB. EMERGENCY SHUT-DOWN-DA-DOOow-n' said Intx with a blank emotion.

Rilemann came came closer to Intx and said 'Poor you On Intx... NOW I GET TO DO WHATEVER I WANT! OO YEAH, OOH YEAH OO YE-' And he suddenly stopped because the time he was saying ooh yeah, his hands touched the restart button on Intx.

As Intx turned on, Rilemann frowned. Intx said 'RESTART COMPLETE. Thank you for turning me on, I thought you'd be playing video games, shouting, and whatever... What's wrong? What's with the frown face?'

Rilemann said 'Am just happy your back, hahaha(SO, SO ,SO, ANNOYING!!! JUST SHUT UP AND SHUT DOWN ALREADY! I FILL LIKE TEARING YOU APART!) hahaa...' With a sarcastic voice.

Rilemann then said 'Am...' And looked at the earth time in America and said 'Ganna go sleep. You can stay up and destroy yourself and extinguish your self. Bad night to you and good night to me cause am the best'

Intx then said 'Am just going to go sleep. Good night' And so Rilemann went to the bed to sleep while Intx recharge. Intx woke up with really low battery. Intx checked checked his wire and saw that it wasn't plugged and so he plugged it.

He said 'If I don't charge up quickly and wake Rilemann up to eat before landing in 4h, we'd be dead. Its good that it only takes me 2h and 43 minutes to charge' He went on alarm mode and set an alarm for exactly 2h 43 minutes. so time ticked till 2h 21 minutes passed. BOOM! A large sound came from outside and then BOOM! BOOM! Came two other. Intx, who was in rest mode and alarm mode, opened his eyes and turned on. He looked around with a feeling something is wrong. He saw nothing wrong, nothing happened but he still stood up to check if Rilemann was all right. Rilemann was sleeping and snoring as if an animal was there sleeping. He slowly shut the door and walked to his recharging room. He reached to the door, lied on the iron bed, plugged himself and enter rest mode.

BOOM! came the noise again. Intx powered on again and the rocket was shacking. He said 'Whats going on!?I... I... I HAVE GOT TO-' BOOM! Came another in which hit Intx on the head. So he got corrupted 'CORRUPTION! CORRUPTION! MUST REBOOT SYSTEM!' And he then rebooted, which took 10 seconds to do so. Fast right? I know. But in a situation like this, even one second is important. So every second that is taking, is every second rather to live, or to die.

Intx had just finished rebooting and is running to Rilemann who is sleeping. Intx has finally reached to Rilemann's door but it was blocked by shelves. Intx said 'I have to bust the door with my mini rocket launcher' So he did as he said and launched the mini rocket launcher which has a bit of power in it. He shoot it and the area went BOOM!

Intx was able to pass the door and yet, Rilemann was sleeping. He tried waking Rilemann up but he just won't wake up. So Intx took a butterfly from his butterfly collection and put it on his face. Rilemann started sneezing. Rilemann opened his eyes and saw the butterfly. Rilemann then Shouted 'AAAAAHH!' And then Intx told him everything.

And then Intx asked 'What do you think happened? Did the rocket hit something? Like a rock?' Rilemann turned his eye away from Intx's robotic eye and responded with and awkward and 'Aaah... Y, yeah it must have been that' Intx razed his eyebrows, folded his back, pushed his head a little bit front, his left foot in the front, standing strait and sarcastically said 'Really? Are we we gonna lie to each other know?'

Rilemann replied with a guilty voice 'Ok, I might have made this ship with strong tinfoil... But, it won't break. It will only lose energy each hit it gets. and right now, it might be out of energy already'

Intx said, ow great, now we are done for and am 47 percent in charge now' Then they started to hear the system say 'EMERGENCY! EMERGENCY! EMERGENCY LANDING ACTIVATE LANDING IN PLANET TOUTOV!'

And BOOM! They landed on planet Toutov. They went out and Rilemann went out with his blue like green sweater but he was freezing because it was cold out side, but Intx wasn't feeling cold because he was a robot.

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Anissa jade
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Hello, I’m Anissa an illustrator with a focus on manga and comic adaptations. Your story stood out to me for its strong cinematic quality. I’d love to discuss a possible collaboration to bring it to life visually. Feel free to connect with me on Discord: anissa_jade.

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