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What is your opinion?
Okay okay I admit it was a hell fun of a time!
"Well, honestly I loved it and I believe that the same author is gonna put in some more effort in the grammar part and BOOM!!!!! There she/he goes."
Gangster in Love
"This is a really good story. I'm kind of in LoVe with this story."
opinion
"i love it and seriously i love her clothes lol"
Gangster in Love
"So, great start! You have some things to work on, things like adding in the little details that you're missing and such. But You also need to go back, revise, edit. I like how the beginning had such an amazing introduction, whether she liked her life or not, or how it was going. Things like that need to be added throughout the whole story. Really good so far!"
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"its was ok"
Charming
"Its good but just need some editing "
