A Night at Granny's

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Summary

"Ge...et ba..ack heeere!" yelled an old lady. "Do not look back John!" yelled Sharel. "Dont worry, I wont, just keep running." panted John. Two people named Sharel and John are explorers and they find a house that is perfect for exploring. He showed her pictures on his phone. The house was dark and looked as if no one lived their for years. The house had lots of vines on the walls and overgrowth including bushes and grass. Butt when they get inside something happens. Will the servive the night or will they not..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
6
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

The Scary House

"Ge...et ba..ack heeere!" yelled an old lady.

"Do not look back John!" yelled Sharel.

"Dont worry, I wont, just keep running." panted John.

"Look!" Yelled Sharel. "A car!"

There was a dark blue car in the distance with it's beamers shining at them. It was their car they used to get wherever they were. They got in the car but...

12 HOURS EARLIER

"Hey Sharel check this out. " John said. "There is an old abandoned house that we need to explore."

He showed her pictures on his phone. The house was dark and looked as if no one lived their for years. The house had lots of vines on the walls and overgrowth including bushes and grass.

"Alright we are here, get the flashlights I'll get the crowbar."said John. "Are you scared."

"NO!" Sharel replied quikly and unshure.

John plied the door open. They walked into darkness untill there flashlights turned on.

"Damn, it smells like someone died in here." John said.

"Or someone undied." replied Sharel. "Boo!"

"Aaaaah!" yelled John frightened.

"Haha, I got you." said Sharel.

"Stop messing around, let's explore." replied John.

They split up and explored the building.

"Aaaahmm, hmmm!" yelled and mumbled John.

"John stop joking were are you." said Sharel. "Answer me John God damn it!"

"Aaaaahmm, hmmm!" yelled and mumbled Sharel.

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