Otter
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Otter

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Summary

"It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all," but Hanny's loss of her dog makes her question if this is true. The author CS Lewis said that the only way to keep our hearts safe from being hurt is to lock them far away from everyone and make sure no one can access them. The only problem is that this method of keeping them safe from being hurt shuts out love. Love can get messy sometimes; it can get painful sometimes, but that is all part of love. In fact, loving tends to break your heart. It can take many years to learn this, as it does with Hanny, the main character of this story, but it is far better to allow love to invade with all the mess it brings than to close ourselves off. Choose life, choose love.

Genre
Other
Author
Peter Wisan
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Otter

“Otter.”

A three year-old named Hanny with sproingy curls and sticky fingers pointed at an adorable puppy wriggling inside the cage. It cuddled against her hand through the bars.

Hanny’s mother corrected her. “Not an otter, Hanny, that’s a puppy.”

“I know dat. His name is Otter.”

Hanny’s family brought Otter home that day. He stayed in Hanny’s lap for the entire ride.

They were the best of friends; it was something they didn’t have to become; they simply were best friends from moment one.

Otter grew much faster than Hanny did. That summer, she toddled to keep up with him, but it wasn’t many years before they were running together. They drank deep of summer and investigated crickets and beetles, drank from lemonade pitchers and swimming holes, and basked in the warmth of long suns and roaring bonfires.

Puppies and little girls grow at different speeds: between Hanny’s youth and Otter’s sickness, there were only three summers where they could run at full speed together.

Hanny cried when he passed, and she asked why she had ever met Otter if he was to leave her so soon. The pain in her heart, which she believed would be on her forever, lessened with time.

Eventually, she grew up and after her mind made memories of children and grandchildren, the time between memories of Otter grew longer.

And many summers later, when Hanny’s granddaughter was three, Hanny took the child to get a puppy.

The little girl scrunched up a puppy’s face with her hands. The puppy licked her face and she giggled.

And Hanny remembered. She remembered her first and best friend, remembered the long days of summer spent running and laughing without a care in the world, and the cool evenings cuddled together with a wet nose in her lap.

And now that she was old, Hanny decided it was better to love.

The little girl smiled. She looked up at her grandmother and pronounced her pet’s new name, “Puppers!”

Let Peter Wisan know what you thought about this chapter!

mina_16
mina_16

There’s something profoundly human in your writing. You don’t just build characters, you unfold them. Their emotions, flaws, and little sparks of hope make the story feel heartbreakingly alive. It’s rare to see writing that captures both pain and beauty so effortlessly. This chapter in particular carried a quiet strength; it hit harder than I expected, and it stayed. You’ve created something that resonates on a soul level.

a year
HannahCadeaus
HannahCadeaus

What a beautifully heartfelt piece! 💛Otter captures the raw truth about love and loss in such a gentle, honest way. Hanny’s journey reminds us that even the deepest heartbreak is proof that we were brave enough to love fully. Stories like this stay with readers long after the last page because they speak to something universal grief, healing, and the courage to open our hearts again.

Truly a touching read, Peter. This is the kind of story that deserves to reach every reader who’s ever loved a pet, lost one, or struggled with letting love back in

a year

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