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The foreigner and the pessimist

" I was hooked on this story as soon as it was described as a love story between two different species. At times a little over emotional, but very well written, with a very detailed plot. I kept wondering how lane could be so emotionally screwed up. But you gave us a well written account of what happened to him in his early life. Now if you would only finish the story. You can’t leave us hanging in space without an appropriate ending. Bill Lesburg "

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Amazing

"Just binge read this and loved it so much. Amazing plot! Sad that it just ended there though. Is there no more coming?"

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The foreigner and the pessimist

"AMAZING! I loved it. I loved the way that the author described everything so clearly and how they showed anxiety and depression like it actually is. This is truly one of the best books that I have ever read. I love this book so much."

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Absolutely Amazing!

"Beautiful story. I loved it so much, all the action and romance was amazing. I hope there is another book!"

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All

"Little long chapters byt other wise good"

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Pessimist

"Greeeeaaatt "

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