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Hell's Greatest Desire, Heaven's Largest Mistake

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Summary

What's it like to be desired by one of Hades's own children despite being the daughter of Gabriel? I don't know, read to find out. "What are you?" He demands holding the ancient spear, Afendia, unknowing of the deep power inscribed on her shaft alone. Ava looks down to her bloody hands then back into his frightened blue ones. "I don't know . . ." She turns and runs from him in a flash of white and red. What has she become?

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
1
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n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue:

Long ago, the gods and goddesses of old created all that you see around you, the oceans and trees and mountains. All of it was formed by them as a contribution to a mass of nothingness we call Earth today. One god in particular refused to claim a name and created a four legged and armed creature that he called "man." This man that he created was meant to worship only him without ever straying from the beliefs that he is the superior god of all. When the man soon became displeased at his increasing loneliness, Aphrodite stepped in and split the man in half before turning the more sensitive half into a woman. When the god saw this was a good thing, he hurriedly claimed the act as his own discrediting Aphrodite for her generosity. As a punishment to the god, Aphrodite cursed the woman's womb that it will breed both male and female offspring whose mate will be unknown but little did she know that she would be the reason for the Heavens making one of the gravest mistakes much to hell's content. . . .

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