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I love it

"I can't stop reading it from the beginning till the end ❤️❤️❤️"

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I love

"💕💕💕 love dis stiry"

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Lovely

"Liking your story line.. it was a awesome love story with action packed thrilling scenes😊👏"

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Cool

"I love the art of the writing, the book is so well written, the character development is phenomenal and I suggest people to read it."

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Danielle

"Love it xx"

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Mafia camp

"Very good book "

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An innocent girl in mafia camp

"I’ve read a lot of mafia novels and this is one of the best I have read 🌟🌟🌟🌟"

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An innocent girl in the mafia camp

"Very well written story. Enjoyed reading till end. Thankyou"

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Tough love

"Cannot put this read down.. It's amazing"

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Inocence inthe mafia

"I have enjoyed this storey very much. I like all the characters very much. Plot is good. Can't wait to finish the storey. "

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An innocent girl in a mafia camp

"This story had lots of twists. It was a fun story to read and didn't disappoint. I do hope there is a sequel to it. Great job!!"

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Nice mafia book from teenagers point of view

"A refreshing take on a mafia story. Very well written. The perspective is from the grandchildren of the mafia boss so all the action without the raging hormones (everything kept PG). You wish to know more about the future of the characters. Absolutely deserves a sequel"

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An innocent girl in a mafia camp

"I really enjoy the plot. The writer doesn’t make the girl a complete weaklings and it’s a story I haven’t heard of before. I hope you publish the rest of it soon. "

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Innocent girl in a mafia camp

"The plot sounds great, but it’s not leading up to what I expected."

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