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"Good book so far"

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Amazing!

"I'm really loving this so far!!! It's easy for me to read, and I can picture each scene and moment of this book as if it were a movie :) keep it up!!"

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No title

"This is a nice book. Amusing actually. I would recommend this book to my friends. The author is very dedicated."

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Beyond reality

"I enjoyed the read. I always love unrequited love drama XD. And fantasy. Win win for me haha. I do recommend finding a gramatically apt friend to proof read, as there were some grammatical errors. And try to use less passive writing ( things like: almost, sort of, kind of). A productive way to write less passively is to start avoiding adverbs...more particularly, words that end in "ly. " they are better used sparingly. I really like the voice in this, the character already feels beleivable. :) hope to read more! "

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