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Good

"I enjoy the story line"

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Edge of my seat

"Very thrilling. Keeps me interested. "

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The True Alpha

" I love this story but I think the chapters are too short and please make the other chapters faster, the suspense is killing me."

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The True Alpha

"This book is good so far, there was some confusing parts in the beginning. Overall it's a good read so far. Keep up the good work. "

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I liked this story

"I love to read this story"

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True alpha

"I love this story a lot I like the pliot but I don't dislike this story it js needs more spice to it "

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True alpha

"Easy plot, lovely and romantic, no waste of time. Not too fast, not too slow. It’s a nice read "

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The true alfa

"So far starts out really good. Waiting to see what happens as it can go so many ways."

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The true Alpha

"Love this so far, only 12 chapters in and although it's been a little slow and we don't have an understanding of ALL the characters roles in the plot we are only on chp12, hopefully a long way to go, things are already picking up. I guess the point is, every chapter makes me excited to read the next."

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Queen

"She needs to fight for her mate not just give up. They belong together they need each other"

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The True Alpha

"The story jumps around too much. It also needs to be more descriptive. "

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The True Alpha

"I like this book, a good storyline but sometimes it's hard to understand what is going on. It doesn't stop you from reading it, it does the opposite! It draws you into the story so as to try and understand it more!! "

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