A story about a kid who learned he has power and want's to avenge his sister and save her from a mysterious man. The Percy Jackson series is a very good series but it always needed a certain character that can make the story line not obvious
Stormlord
“Hey little sister,” Jason said “ how are you doing”
“I’m good and you?” she asked
“I’m fine,” Jason replied
Out of nowhere while we were walking in the park a person takes her and starts to run, Jason started running to, the man noticed he looked at Jason and smiled and he disappeared like her teleported. Jason vowed to avenge his little sister.
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