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What is your opinion?
Boss Lady
"I only there are only a few chapters out, but I am liking this so far. I think once more is uploaded, the story will come together. Not bad so far though! "
the boss lady
"I like history because it has a lot of rhythm. But maybe you should insert more thoughts of the protagonist between the dialogues. That will make the story better and have more literary content. It's just an appreciation that I send you as a reader and writer. Obviously you can follow her or not. You are going for the good way. regards"
Nice story
"Could have been presented in better way."
