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So shocking!

"This story is crazy with so many plot twists!! Loving it so far, and I can’t wait to finish. "

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Bad English

"Too many times you either miss or repeat words. Decide if you are writing in old English or modern. The continual changes make it hard to read and keep the mind in the correct era"

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Good story

"This story is one of the best storyline. I have read. Good writing, sad,beautiful. I highly recommend this book "

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Do not forget me

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Lovely

"Lovely content"

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Do not forget me

"This book is amazing and I really loved it.The only thing was the grammatical errors which should be corrected. Overall loved the revenge and the plot twist 🤩"

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Give me another chance

"I love your writings. They are pretty good. But you don't care about your grammar. I am learning English, and sometimes it's too hard for me to know what you mean. But keep writing, I like way of your writing. It's reflection of the real life. And more you forgot that Lisa was in Troy's body in the market 😊"

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The killed ghost

"I love this"

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Do Not Forget Me

"Very good story plot it is a very good book thank you for the great read my friend 😀 "

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yes!

"Love the revenge!!"

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Do not forget me

"Excellent is all I can say"

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Do not forget me

"I really loved this novel, it taught me that every actions have consequences at the same time revenge is not a good response. Lisa got rapped and killed because she was going against his father's words seeking revenge to his father because he used to leave her alone every night. Lisa as a ghost ended up killing innocent people in her revenge process. People like the cashier who was protecting his shop and Mrs Peterson who was just protecting her son as all parents does. Revenge turn us into monsters and invites more enemies, Liza ended up being the enemy to her father and her best friend, Amanda. Liza gradually became an evil person day by day, breaking promises to her father and her friend who allowed her into her body, Liza first blocked her friend as she was against her decisions of killing Troy's mother and she caged her because she was going to tell Lisa father. Revenge is a process, now Lisa wants to destroy her father because he stopped her from taking the body of Troy ex girlfriend."

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idk

"I really loved your work on this book but the spelling had me very confused"

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Entertaining 😁

"Very entertaining book. Sometimes difficult to follow due to grammar errors. Should go back and make corrections. Great plot and good character development. Thank you! "

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Do noy forget me

"Hunger for revenge...we never knew our future, but we should be the best. Lisa, good girl who turnout to be monster. So dramatically"

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Do Not Forget Me

"I loved this book but the part when Troy had to eat his own mother was kinda grossing . But overall I rate this book 5 stars but I don’t recommend kids reading this. "

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Do not forget me

"Wasn't going to read this, but the story got interesting really quickly. Great revenge angle. Good finish. "

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Don't forget me

"Very good I could not put it down."

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Do not forget me

"The story was intriguing and kept you interested it was well told and the grammar was good not like some books I've read. Hope there will be a second book if so I will read it "

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Do Not Forget Me

"I love everything about it. It sure was very interesting."

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