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LOVE IT!

"I love the way it is written. The different povs are so cool. I love the way everything is described and the way their emotions are displayed. I also love the sense of mystery. PLEASE CONTINUE, we can’t keep waiting like this😭🙏 What a cliffhanger..."

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Skate to my heart

"I love it, it was very interesting and entertaining and enjoyable. I know I said a LOT of ands but you get the picture. I LOVED IT. I definitely recommend it for hockey girls/guys. For me, I play hockey and I had this kind of happen to me. So it was like ‘wow that’s what happened to me’ kind of moment. "

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Really entertaining

"Its fun and entertaining to read. I hope you write more chapters to see what happens next, as so far we got to the hook... ;)"

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This is really good

"I think he will do the right thing "

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❤️❤️

"Hope we don’t have to wait to long for an update. I treated to see where this bet takes these 2 "

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