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What is your opinion?
Greeting
"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer."
Falcon's heaven
"This is a good start to a story. It needs a little bit more development. The plot is not very complicated and is confusing at times. The dialogue is very straightforward and almost awkward. I feel like perhaps the writer isn't a native speaker of English. Just because of the spelling/grammatical errors and the word choices. Keep working on it 👍"
