Imperfect Like The Moon
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Imperfect Like The Moon

Summary

'You were just like the moon. So lonely, so of full imperfections. But just like the moon, You always shined in times of darkness.'

Status
11yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Imperfect Like The Moon

Severus Tobias Snape

9 January, 1960 - 3 June, 2008

Devoted Husband, Loving Father, Fierce Friend


You were just like the moon.So lonely, so full of imperfections.But just like the moon,You always shined in times of darkness.


Do you remember how we met, Dear Husband? I do. I hated you twice as much as you hated me, I am sure. Fresh into seventeen, with a world of possibilities ahead, and the Ministry issues a decree that all single witches and wizards are to be paired off and married, with no consideration for age or beauty in the matches made. Imagine the horror I felt at knowing my husband was well old enough to be my father. It was quiet extreme I assure you. Had I known then what I know now...I would have treasured our few short years together.

I could not know at such a still tender age that I would grow to love you more than life itself, and that in your eternal absence, I would be irrevocably changed. Though our children remain, they are little more than a painful reminder of what I have lost, and what I shall never have again. You. Ten years with you has by no means prepared me for the next one hundred or more with you gone. It is sometimes hard to believe that at just twenty-seven I am the widowed mother of two beautiful children. What am I to do Severus? Though we are comfortable in the life you provided for us, I am painfully lonely, and Kaylen and Josiah are without their father.

What am I to tell them my love? Josiah cries for you, and at four, he is to young to understand that you have passed through the Veil. And sweet Kaylen, she will always be too young to remember the father she once had. You will only ever be a photograph for her, a memory just barely there and too faint to ever truely recall...

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lezzie_diaz

Hello!

I just finished reading your story, and I’m honestly still replaying it in my head. The emotions, the way the characters breathe on the page, and the rhythm of the narrative,it all felt so vivid and cinematic.

As I was reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how incredible it would look as a comic. I’m a freelance artist who loves turning powerful stories into striking visual narratives, and your work immediately inspired me. If you’d ever be open to seeing your world come to life in panels and illustrations, I’d love the chance to collaborate.

No rush or pressure,I mainly wanted to share how much your story moved me. If you’d like to connect, here’s where you can find me:

𝗗𝗜𝗦𝗖𝗢𝗥𝗗: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)
𝗜𝗚: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)

𝗘𝗠𝗔𝗜𝗟: (𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐳𝐢𝐞𝐝𝐨𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐥𝐥)

Thank you again for sharing such a beautiful piece. It truly left an impression on me.

Warm regards,
lizzie

a year

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