Dancing For Caroline by BeckaBean at Inkitt
Customize readability
Aa

Dancing for Caroline

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

It hung effortlessly in the air, the last thing I saw was the maniacal glint in It's great gold eye as it dove towards me, claws outstretched... It has started raining, a torrential downpour intent on separating me from the rest of the flock. I desperately beat my wings, trying to get above the clouds. A mistake I will forever regret....

Status
Complete
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 4 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Swallow

I open my eyes and there it is, the world, big and loud and home. It's morning, the dawn light filters through the thicket of branches around me. I shake my waterlogged feathers as my friends stir from their sleep around me. I am always the first awake and the last asleep. You could say that I am the black sheep of my flock, if you can say that about a bird that is...

Today is the day, the day we fly. It's my first migration, I'm the only one who has never been before. England to Africa; that's a long way, over 7,000 miles. By the way, I'm a swallow. Though I am not normal, I am an albino, white all over. My name is Ash, fate has such a twisted sense of humor, do you think? The flock tells me that I am not supposed to exist, that I am a freak. I don't Believe them. Everyone deserves a chance. Anyway, I have to get moving, they'll leave without me, they will.

We're three days into the journey, there's hundreds of us now, flocks from far and wide, all joined together in a writhing, pulsing mass of black chaos, but there is safety in numbers.

It is here. It has been following us, picking us off, the young and weak are especially vulnerable. I'm worried, I'm a moving target, It'll get me any day now.

It's evening now and the sun is setting, the sky painted in vivid reds and oranges. I can feel It's eyes watching me, eerily, It hangs in the air, ever motionless, ever the harbinger of death. It has started raining, but still we fly, a torrential downpour intent upon separating me from the others. I desperately beat my wings, trying to get above the clouds. A mistake.

There, right above me, was It... It's terrible form illuminated by a flash of lightning. It hung effortlessly in the air, the last thing I saw was the maniacal glint in It's great gold eye as it dove towards me, cutting like a blade through the air

Let BeckaBean know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

I will hopefully post a second chapter within the next two days xxx

8 years
author

So good! And so original x
can't wait for Chapter 2

8 years

Further Recommendations

A Blessing in Disguise

Miriam0011: Hi there! I really enjoyed reading your story, it was both interesting and well written. Your style feels very natural and easy to connect with. Do you usually write in this genre, or do you explore others as well?

Read Now
Our third chance

VD: Quick read. Cute story. Good writing. Smooth flow.

Read Now
Purple Heart

Kerry Kennedy Author: Atlas and Snow.What a beautiful and heartfelt romance.This book showed us that love could strengthen a man's desire to try harder for his life.Atlas was existing after his last tour. He lost his leg. One of his men had died.He was scarred emotionally, physically, and mentally until Snow appeared in ...

Read Now
The Contract Wife

Lynne: Beautiful story very enjoyable.well done.

Read Now
An Irish Match

Elisa_sims: I really appreciate the creativity in your story. I'd love to discuss it with you sometime

Read Now
The Alpha's Exiled Mate

Elisa_sims: Your characters are incredibly memorable. I'd enjoy hearing more about how you developed them

Read Now
Silver's Second Chance

Ku_Rolet: I love the story and the love between the couple. It doesn’t drag unnecessarily, which I really enjoyed. However, I felt that the ending was a bit rushed because Silver being a druid was revealed so suddenly, without much explanation. That part of the story still feels like a mystery, especially how...

Read Now
Welded Shut

Sydne: Very heartwarming story. It has real emotions. The main female character reminds me somewhat of myself having to deal with childhood trauma that just leads you down a path of more bad decisions until one day you make a decision that changes everything for the better and it’s hard for to realize that...

Read Now
Nothing Between Us

OamisAL: It’d been quite a while I read romance and love stories so I’m glad it’s this one I came across first. Very steamy and dreamy in places and my heart jolted with pain in places too.It’s also quite realistic and can very easily be a tried story. Well done for the imaginative understanding of the comp...

Read Now