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Jumbled story

"It would be interesting... But this story line is very jumbled and inconsistent. "

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Kinda messy

"Very confusing and hard to understand, the whole story is kind of a jumbled mess but I feel like with some work it could be so much better. "

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The innocent do not couple with the corrupt

"The story line changed, when did they get married? Why did she just leave? "

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The innocent do not couple with the corrupt

"The book was very jumbled and it didn't make any sense. The chapters were inconsistent and the character development and storyline simply didn't exist."

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