Forget You
See here, you still linger
First of January and I’m still bitter
Pain of the fall out that you caused
One moment, all hope became lost
Why can’t I forget you yet?
Why do you feel like my biggest regret?
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First poetry written by me in 2019! Posted to Panana! This is a short collection of 10 quick poems, written in January 2019 that I've submitted to Inkitt hoping to get reads and feedback. If well liked, I will upload the rest of the collection. This poetry is honest, raw and emotionally packed. Suitable for readers 14+
See here, you still linger
First of January and I’m still bitter
Pain of the fall out that you caused
One moment, all hope became lost
Why can’t I forget you yet?
Why do you feel like my biggest regret?
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Cora: Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable t...
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dtjenkins5: A good read with all the complexities of relationships. The twists and turns of the plot add a special dimension.
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Karly Mcferran: Very cute story! I cheered when they finally admired their feelings! Very well done!
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Helhall: Before anything else, I’d like to emphasize that I really did like the overall story. Characters were more than two-dimensional, so definitely a plus. I didn’t even mind the shifting points of view.But...There are a couple of things that made reading the story very difficult.1- Punctuation is your f...
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cweedling76: The idea that she is a human in a wolf world. My sister. Has just enough excitement to keep me wanting to read more!
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Margaret Lambert: Strong womenAuthor not frightened to show women with strength
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libaHuntJT9: With good plots n turns. Good rainy afternoon book.
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Caroline Lawson: This is really high quality writing. The plot is complicated and the characters well developed. It’s the best I’ve read yet!
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The rhyming words in this piece definitely sets the pace for the upcoming poems. I appreciate how it is quick and to the point and yet delivers a punch. Good job!
I love it so far. You are an amazing writer. I to write poetry but have not published any. Reading yours makes me want to share mine!! Cant wait for updates!!