I love it but...

"I love this book but there were too many mistakes that ruined the book. If you say ‘the man’ or ‘the woman’ you should say that about other people, not the main characters. Then you kept saying ‘His fiancée’ in random parts and I thought he was marrying a man. Then there were parts where you said ‘shingami’ and honestly there needs to be a small vocab list. I would say, if referring to the main characters use She and He. That’s all, not the woman or the man. When you used the woman and the man, unfortunately the book became confusing, especially when Asato went to talk to the priest and when he was at the Fairy Bakery. Also, I found it weird how Anna was so happy to marry and how she didn’t react that much to Asato’s secret marriage. I know that this is supposed to be cute but I don’t think that would normally happen. Also, the chapter is way too long. It could have been halved. "